Topic #1

Before I start writing, I think about what I am writing about and I organize it in my head. I write out my introduction paragraph with my thesis in it. In my thesis, I make sure to include my subtopics and that the following paragraphs start off with my subtopic. My conclusions are typically lame because I feel that I'm almost done so I rush through it. My conclusions are mostly criticized through the editting process so that's normally what I fix in my essays. To make my essays look good, I try to include quotes, metaphors, and citations.